Critique by: April Mae Pitogo

This Poem is about saying many things to someone, and never  meaning anything but the desire for that someone to show  affectiom for you. Some of your thoughts may not also be heard, but in them the lie the wonders of your feelings, deep, full, and passionate.

This speaks to me because I sometimes cannot bring myself to really phrase what I want to say to people. I rent out understatements, with holding me of that wonder of coming clean with what i have in mind. I admit abusing  that filter in my head to much by actually mistaking it for my own timidity sometimes. Personally, I like the poem for its simplicity and the fact that it made me ponder on some of my experiences where i had a  wearying time disclosing my true feelings but eventuallt did it anyway.

Words by: Angela Manalang Gloria