Critique by: Memphis Aleksandr L. Olaguir

The poem is Beautiful. There are lines in the 1st stanza that are grammatically wrong like in "never meant" and  " words that i wrote instead of right" to give parallelism on the ist line. Sometimes its unbelievable that no matter how many words we say, I still ran out of ways to express myself. I speak and somehow its forgotte. I know this is just the same as other but we are human and we also commit real and true mistakes but we must accept our mistake and change it to be good and apologize people that we hurt.

WORDS by: Angela Manalang Gloria